1. What is the nature of this study? This thesis
appears to be educationally oriented, yet its precise academic positioning
remains somewhat ambiguous. It would benefit from a clearer articulation of its
educational framework, particularly through a focused literature review that
engages with relevant domains such as life education, educational psychology,
and pedagogical theory. A related and important question concerns the
relationship between educational concerns and theological inquiry. While the
thesis references public theology and the role of the church, it does not
sufficiently clarify its objectives within the field of public theology.
Specifically, it remains unclear what the thesis seeks to contribute to public
theological discourse or how it intends to engage the church’s role in educational
praxis.
A. What is the academic nature of this study? Is
it primarily an educational-oriented thesis, and if so, how is this reflected
in its structure and methodology?
B. Does the literature review sufficiently engage with
educational domains such as life education, educational psychology, and
pedagogical theory? If not, how might it be expanded to better reflect
current developments in these fields?
C. How are educational concerns correlated with
theological concerns in this study? Is there a clear framework that
connects pedagogical insights with theological reflection?
D. What is the thesis aiming to achieve within the
field of public theology? While references to public theology and the
church are present, is the intended contribution to public theological
discourse clearly articulated?
2.
To
what extent does the thesis demonstrate adequate gender, cultural, and
socio-political sensitivity, despite its emphasis on contextuality?
A.
Given that humility has historically
been used to suppress marginalized groups, particularly women, how does the
thesis ensure that its advocacy for humility does not inadvertently reinforce
such oppressive dynamics?
B.
Why is Confucianism prioritized over
other influential Asian traditions such as Buddhism or Daoism in the
theological and cultural analysis? What values or assumptions underlie this
selection?
C.
How does the thesis account for the
socio-political context in which the interviews were conducted—particularly in
light of the post-2019 social movement in Hong Kong, the COVID-19 pandemic, and
other relevant developments?
3.
How
does the thesis engage with classical Chinese philosophical frameworks in its
treatment of the paradox between humility and courage?
A.
For
instance, Mencius discusses the interplay of Ren (benevolence)
and Yin (restraint), while Daoism explores the dynamic balance
of Yin and Yang. Even the concept of the
beginner’s mind in Confucianism reflects aspects of humility. How are these
traditions incorporated into the study’s theological reflection?
B.
In
what ways does the thesis address the Confucian pedagogical tradition of 傳道
(transmitting the Way), 授業
(imparting knowledge), and 解惑
(resolving doubts)? How are these educational
principles reflected in the thesis’s approach to character formation and
leadership development?
C.
What
is the theological rationale behind the structure of the Delta Triangle
Compass? Specifically,
why are faith, love, and hope positioned as the foundational virtues, and why
is wisdom placed at the apex? How does this arrangement reflect the thesis’s
theological and educational priorities?
4. Is the role of the church in character leadership
cultivation clearly demonstrated or merely aspirational?
A. A comment notes that the church’s role is not
clearly evidenced. Does the thesis provide concrete examples of church
engagement beyond individual Christian actors?